Developmental Edits
-Who It’s For-
For writers who are actively drafting or revising a book and want ongoing, story-level feedback.
What’s included in this editing service:
Deep, story-level feedback as you write, focused on structure, pacing, character arcs, and narrative logic
Line-by-line in-text commentary that digs into what’s working, what’s unclear, and where the story could be pushed further
Thoughtful, leading questions that help you see your own book more clearly and make stronger decisions as a writer
Collaborative brainstorming to flesh out ideas, explore possibilities, and clarify where the story wants to go
Support for partial or full drafts, whether you’re sending chapters as you go or sharing a complete manuscript
Guidance on cohesion and continuity, helping new ideas integrate smoothly with what’s already on the page
Concrete examples and suggestions (when useful) to illustrate how a problem might be approached
Ongoing conversation through chat, email, and live calls to talk through revisions, questions, and next steps
A story timeline and big-picture overview to keep track of character arcs, plot threads, and key developments
A second-pass review to make sure revisions align with the larger story and don’t introduce new conflicts
Costs and format
Price: $0.03 per word
Minimum word count: 10,000 words
Format: Microsoft Word

